help meeeeee...................................

[mariam110]

Wao thats so cool Ansari magar na jaanay mujhay kiyoun lag rahay hai kay mein nay yeh shair kaafi arsay pehlay suna tha.well anyways u should visit www.poetrypk.com you can submit your poetries here.i mean to say that your original poetries.woh jo aap nay khud likhi ho.waisay app ki shairi say mein itni impress hoee houn kay AARZ KIYA HAI

Aik larki thi deewani si
Her larkay pay woh marti thi.
Nazraain uttha kay,
Zulfain phela kay,
Rastoun say guzraa kerti thi.
Kholay aam sab kay samnay
Love letters likha kerti thi.
Aur apnay bf say her waqat poochti thi,
Date per kab chalo gay?date per kab chalo gay?
Aur woh bas yehi keh pataa tha kay
"Bill kiya tumhara BAAP day ga."

khuda hafiz and keep smiling.

SYEDA MARIAM ABIDI