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POETRY??
12-07-2004, 06:53 PM,
#1
POETRY??
Dear All

ANYONE interested in poetry here?? I myself am a big fan of Parveen shakir and Noshi Gillani. Farhat Abas Shah and Faiz.
I would love to initiate BAIT BAZI here..

here comes the first shair....

Kabhi to ao kabhi to betho kabhi to pocho kabhi to dekho
Tumhari basti main hum fakiron ka hal kyon sogwar sa hay.. (by Saghir)

I will really appriciate if you also mention the name of the poet..

take care
HUMA

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12-07-2004, 08:31 PM,
#2
 
"yeh na thi hamaree qismat keh wisaaal - e yaar hota
agar aur jeetay rahtay yehi intizaar hota

Koi maray dil se poochey teray teer - e - neem kash ko
yeh khalish kahan sey hotee jo jigar key paar hota

It was very tough to write it in roman urdu. Huma... havent you read faraz and mohsin naqvi. They are great poets as well. This "shair" is from Mir Taqi Mir ....... (I guess)

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12-08-2004, 01:38 AM,
#3
 
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"yeh na thi hamaree qismat keh wisaaal - e yaar hota
agar aur jeetay rahtay yehi intizaar hota

Koi maray dil se poochey teray teer - e - neem kash ko
yeh khalish kahan sey hotee jo jigar key paar hota

It was very tough to write it in roman urdu. Huma... havent you read faraz and mohsin naqvi. They are great poets as well. This "shair" is from Mir Taqi Mir ....... (I guess)

hey ophie,,,,there is a correction,,
the above mentioned "shair" are of GHALIB not Mir Taqi Mir,
and its a good idea to conduct baait bazi here,,
best wishes
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12-08-2004, 02:58 AM,
#4
 
hi Dear Friends

Yes I do like Parveen Shakir(Late) , Faraz & Galib & few others..
Waqar U r correct it is Galib's share...

Ok lets start

* Ah ko chahiyee ik Umer aser honay tak
Koon Jeeta hay Teri zulf ke ser honay Tak (By Galib)

Yes when ever we talk about "khusboo" we remeber Parveen Shakir
It is title gazal of his book "Khusboo"


* Koba Koba Phail Gaye Baat Shanasayee ki
Us ne Khushboo ki tarah meri Pazeeraye ki

Kaisay keh doon ke mujhay Choorhdiya us ne
Baat to such hay mager baat hay Ruswayee ki

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12-08-2004, 03:38 AM,
#5
 
Hey thanks for response guys, atleast some of the accountants are into poetry )

here it comes again, and this time mughay bhi CHACHA GHALIB yaad a rahay hain...

YARAB WOH NA SAMGH HAIN NA SAMGHAIN GAI MERI BAAT
DAY AUR DIL UN KO JO NA DAY MUGH KO ZABAN AUR

And yes i am a great TABLE fan of moshin naqvi and faraz too, actually i love urdu poetry and i collect books, so when ever i go to pakistan my bags are heavy cuz of the books, and my mom warns me now )

My favourite book is SEHRA KHARID LAIN HAIN.. and my FAVOURITE SHAIR of this book is ...
APNI HAR IK SHAM HAR IK RAAT BECH KAR
AB AGAYA HAY JENA HAMAIN ZAAT BECH KAR
HUM BHI KYA AJAB HAIN KAY KARI DHOOP KAY TALAY
SEHRA KHARID LAYE HAIN BARSAT BAICH KAR

God bless you all
HUMA

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12-08-2004, 07:38 AM,
#6
 

hi salaam-o-aliklum to every i am new mamber here) hope have a nice talk with u all ,,,,,



Ansoon ko bohat samjhaya tanhai main aya kero...
Mehfil main humara mazak na uoraya kero
Phir Ansoo tapak ker bola .......
Mehfil main app ko tanha paatay hain isleye chalay aatay hain


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12-08-2004, 07:47 AM,
#7
 

Bena dakhay onn kee tasweer bana sakta hoon
Bena melay onn ka haal bata sakta hoon
Meri Mohabbat main atne takat hai
Meri ankh ka ansoo onn ke ankh se gara sakta hoon .


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12-08-2004, 07:53 AM,
#8
 
gud....
wht abt wasi shah..)




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12-08-2004, 08:06 AM,
#9
 
mairee dunyaa sanwaar day koi
mujhay thoraa sa pyaar day koi
mairee dharkanain baitab kardai
mairee aankhoon ko intezar day koi
main bhool jaaoon be-qarari ko
mujh ko itna qarar day koi
apnee zulfoon main qaid karlay
mujh ko mujh say farar day koi
ashk ankhon say choom loon uss kay
khud pay yeh ikhtyaar day koi
yeah sab rahatain qurb-o-rafaqat kee
mujh ko bas eik baar day koi
mujh ko thora sa pyar day koi


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12-08-2004, 08:08 AM,
#10
 

WOH MERA THA YEH BATANA AJEEB LAGTA HAI
AB US SE AANKH MILANA AJEEB LAGTA HAI ...
JO ZINDAGI MAI KABHI BHI MERA HO NA PAYA
AB US KA KHWAAB MAI AANA AJEEB LAGTA HAI ...
BARAY KHULOOS SE DAWAT TO US NE BHAJE HAI
PAR US KI MEHFIL MAI JANA AJEEB LAGTA HAI...
THA JIS KA HAATH HAMESHA HAMARAY HAATHOO MAI
AB US SE HAATH MILANA AJEEB LAGTA HAI...


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12-08-2004, 08:55 AM,
#11
 
Thanks for ur contribution heart beat... plz do mention the poet's name, if you know that..

And i just have a request in order to bait bazi that plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do stick to the rules. and sab say important rule hay kay aap last shair kay last alphabit say shuru kartay hain shair.. so plzzzzzzz do stick to that,, and if one wants to post ghazals and shairs in addition to that they are most welcome.. but plz let us have this BAIT BAZI going..

thanks.. so who is coming up with a shair starting with RRRRRR....)

ANd as for wasi shah then yeah,, i liked his KANGAN,, and a few other things,, but i am not very fond of his poetry,, i have read it, but could not make myself buy his book...

See you guys tomorrow.. till then CHAO

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12-08-2004, 06:20 PM,
#12
 
Rok sako to pehli baarish ki boonthon ko tum roko
Kachi mitti to mahkay gi, hai mitti ki majboori

I think you cant write the best poetry in bait baazi coz you have to stick to the rules ...
here is one from my favourites ....I really dont know who's the poet

"Chalo azaab sahein dosti ke, yoonhi sahi
Keh woh kisi ka hua hum kisi ke, yoonhi sahi"

And maam Huma, I my self have been a poetry fan in past. I almost have read a whole library as far as poetry is concerned. Have you read Jon Alia???? He is one of my personal favourites.

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12-08-2004, 09:05 PM,
#13
 
KI MUHAMMAD SAI WAFA TO NAI HUM TAIRAY HAIN HAIN
YEH JAHAAN CHEEZ HAI KIA LOH O KALAAM TARAY HAIN


ZABAAN SAI KEH DIA LAA ELAH TO KIA HASIL
DILO NIGAH MOMUN NAHI TO KUCH NAHI


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12-08-2004, 09:10 PM,
#14
 
before i proceed i would like to tel u the meaning of KAM_SUKHAN (KAM BOLNAY WALA)


MAIRAY KAM-SUKHAN KA YEH HUK-KAM THA
K KALAAM AUS SAI MAI KAM KAROON
MAIRAY HOONT AISAY SIL-LAY K PHIR
MAIREE CHUPP NAI UN-NAY RULLA DIA

(MY OWN POETRY0

SAJJD DAR

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12-08-2004, 11:15 PM,
#15
 
sorry huma .. i was not know it before,,,,,,, ) ok last word is
A

SO

Aankhon ki zuban woh samajh nahi paate
Honth hain magar kuch keh nahi paate
Apni bebasi kis tarah kahen
Koi hai jinke bina hum reh nahi paate!



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