ik nazam CA key liye

[chintoo]

hi salam sathio aik punjaby nazam CA key liye

apney ser di wail karai terey laye
sooli utey jaan cherhaii terey laye

terey kolon ghut nahi sarya pani da
asan tey lahoody nehar wagaii terey laye

cherdey lahndey tera na apraia mey
kerda kini hoor kamai terey laye

ajey we tenoon shaq ay merey amlaan tey
doostann utey choory chalay terey laye

kitaban utey sajdah ker key tenoon mey
apni sooli app uthaii terey laye

terey werga koi nahi nal zamanedey
CA sar dy sharat lagay terey laye


sathio iss section mey achy achy poems likh ker bejhey specially khud likhi hoi
ur inshalaa mey assey ur bhy nazmye pesh kerta rahoon ga

m.farrukh

[chintoo]

ICAP DI TELWAAAAAAAAAAAR

SADEY KAKH UDA DEY WEYGI ICAP DY TELWAAAAAR
SANOOON RUB BHOLLA DEY WEYGI ICAP DY TELWAR

QABRAN KADHAN WALEY APNA DHANDHA SOCHAN HOOR
SAAADY QABAR BANA DEY WEYGI ICAP DY TELWAAAR

AKKH REHAA SI BHANGRA PANDA RATEIIN IZRAAEL
MEA BHAAR GHATA DEY WEYGI ICAP DI TELWAAAAR

TUTI WEKH KANALI WEHREY HOYA PAK YAQEENEEEEN
MEENOON ZEHAR KHAWA DEY WEY GI ICAP DI TELWAAR

MFC JHEREEY KIDHREY KERDEY PAYYNEY SHOOOOOOR
CHEYHTY CHUP KARA DEY WEY GY ICAP DY TELWAAR




DEAR FELLOWS I SEE THT REGULARY ALMOST TEN MEMBERS READ MY POEM BUT NO ONE REPLY ON IT .IF ANY ONE NOT UNDERSTAND ANY SENTENCE CONTACT WITH ME ON THIS FORUM I WILL TRANSLATE IT

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Edited by - chintoo on Oct 28 2004 13938 PM

[Huma]

Dear Farrukh..

I just read ur both poems,, i understood the first one,, but had problems getting the second.. what is talweer.. or whatever that is written.. and plz a quick summary will be appriciated..

Otherwise,, ncie poems u write,, lagta ahy shairi main naya naya qadam rakha hay,, and CA ki jan ko rona bhi )

Regards
HUMA

[chintoo]

HI
SALAM
RHNX FOR REPLY HUMAAAAAAAAA
I DONT KNOW WHAT I CALL U BUT FORGET IT AND SORRY FOR CALLING U DIRECTLLY HUMA
U MENTIONED A WORD TELWAAR ITS A SWORD THIS AND U R RIGHT THT I M A NEWLY BORN POET AND ALL THESE ARE WROTE BY ME 3 MONTHS AGO I HAV LOT OF MORE WHICH I PRESENT HERE IF I GOT MORE APPRECIATION FROM FELLOWS .

AND ALL THESE ARE FOR A MUSHAIRA HELD IN OUR COLLEGE 2 MONTHS AGO AND SPECAILLY SAID BY MY FAVOURATE TEACHER SIR HABIB TO WRITE ON THIS TOPIC

m.farrukh

[Huma]

Hi Farrukh

No worries, call me whatver u like,, ROSE KO KISI BHI NAAM SAY PUKARO WOH ROSE HI RAHAY GA ).. you can call me appi, baji, huma,,.. and plz a quick summary of ur poems too,, as not everything is understadnable in ur poems..

and keep up the good work,, do post more poems,, i love poetry,, ab jo aap likhtay hoo agar us ko bhi poetry kah saktay hain toooooooooooooo... kidding

take care
huma

[Pracs]

Good work yaar,.. continue with u r poems...

btw i gather u r just a starter in the profession, since u mention 'college' why so much 'negative' in u r poems.... or is it 'dard' a basic ingredients for all poets...

"Allah does not change the state of people unless they change what is within themselves" Quran 1311

[noman]

aha ha ha...kya baat a

ZABARDAST....laggey raho.....

per punjabi spelling dey vich zara improvment di zaroorat hai...
pehli waari parh k sahi samajh nai lagdi...per sher top de c.

is tarah...just sugestion

saaday kakh udaa daywegi icap di talwaar
saanu rab bhula daywegi icap di talwaar

yaar tu cheeta lagga !!



Edited by - noman on Oct 28 2004 113339 PM

[Azeem Shah Khan]

i wish i could understand punjabi

azeem

[chintoo]

hi
salam
first of all thanxto all of u to appreciate my poems and
huma one thing is thtkey rose key sath kantey bhy hootey hein jo mujhey lagey hein
and for nomaan i know key yaar merey spelling mistake hooty hey kher i try my best and the new one is
this one is mixture of clearance certificate and icap
clearance certificate<cc> is required from college where u studied for taking exams in icap

ucha kinj na kerey boll cc da
icap gal wich paya dhool cc da

cc tenho kedhy we labhni nahi
jinha merzy phool seeena kitaba da

ban jandey ney mamey akey dherey we
sakht cretaria jinha cc da

wich medaney akey teqna howey tey
skans wech wajda dhool cc da

sadian teker tery koollon muqna nahi
eena sayapa cc da

ca kern laga tu sangya nahi
mfc paal liya ee roog cc da


m.farrukh

[Huma]

poor chinto....

sorry agar aap ko meray kantay chubh gaye,, a sincere advice is that next time door say baat karna.. )

keep it up...
regards
huma

[ali4u3]

nice .....
liken mai sirf read ker sakta hoo.....likh nahi sakta kuch bcz i m not a poet
nywayz farukh...(Y)
yeh sabb ICAP ki e-mail per bhi send kia kar yarr

Never seek advice from a Chartered Accountant. They are trained to find problems not solutions.

[noman]

yaar..chintoo (candy)<img src=icon_smile_tongue.gif border=0 align=middle>

the latest one was not that good!
the second misra not equal in length or weight....
try adding some words to the second lines.....

you see u get critical analysis here<img src=icon_smile_cool.gif border=0 align=middle>

[chintoo]

hi
salam
soory to huma tht she mind tht.

and now i have a poem on america and pakistani govt


her tasveeer america dy
mey jageer america dy

sindh punjab america dy
balu pathan america dy

khulam khulla kinj phiraan
galll zanjeer america dy

miti ker key chada ga
her tedbeer america dy



i hope key appp ku pasand ayy gy
or sorry to all of u agar kissi ko mujh sey koi nuqsaan poonhcha hoo ur bura lagy hoo mery baat
speciallly huma tu kuch ziada hy tease lag raheen hey
ok



m.farrukh

[chintoo]

hi
salam
soory to huma tht she mind tht.

and now i have a poem on america and pakistani govt


her tasveeer america dy
mey jageer america dy

sindh punjab america dy
balu pathan america dy

khulam khulla kinj phiraan
galll zanjeer america dy

miti ker key chada ga
her tedbeer america dy



i hope key appp ku pasand ayy gy
or sorry to all of u agar kissi ko mujh sey koi nuqsaan poonhcha hoo ur bura lagy hoo mery baat
speciallly huma tu kuch ziada hy tease lag raheen hey
ok



m.farrukh

[Huma]

no chinto,,,.. i do not mind anything at all,, i do not know what gave u that impression.. as i am here just for enjoyment,, and i do not take things personally.. i guess no need of further excuses,, and explanations,,